Hello! Thank you very much for your application. Overall, things are looking good, but we would like to seek clarification on a couple of points. Specifically:
Please name Graves' daemon or let us know that he is going with the default 'Sharid.'
Based on Credence’s application, it seems Graves developed significant CRAU relationships not shown here. We would like a very brief summary or list of his valued relationships (rather than focusing on highlighting plot events that occurred), or you can let us know that the attachment is mostly one-sided.
Please drop us a few bullet points or paragraphs in a reply to this comment!
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Hello! Thank you very much for your application. Overall, things are looking good, but we would like to seek clarification on a couple of points. Specifically:
- Please name Graves' daemon or let us know that he is going with the default 'Sharid.'
- Based on Credence’s application, it seems Graves developed significant CRAU relationships not shown here. We would like a very brief summary or list of his valued relationships (rather than focusing on highlighting plot events that occurred), or you can let us know that the attachment is mostly one-sided.
Please drop us a few bullet points or paragraphs in a reply to this comment!