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Xistentia: Mod ([personal profile] spoofer) wrote 2017-05-29 09:56 pm (UTC)

REVISIONS

Revisions.

Hello! Thank you very much for your application. Overall, things are looking good, but we would like to seek clarification on a couple of points. Specifically:
  • Our application specifies that important CRAU or CRAU trajectory be summarized in the Background section.
  • We would to define the upper limits on his physical enhancements. For example, can he lift a car or throw one? Can he move too quickly for the eye to follow, or just twice an Olympian sprinter’s speed?
  • For the Exit Strategy question, we would like to know how did D.E.S.T.I.N.Y. appear in Eudio?
  • For the Morality question, we’d like to know why did Aric evolve? What sort of event would regress him?
  • For the Intimate Relationships question, there is a subquestion about what obstacles might get in the way of such relationships, and we’d like to know what kind of obstacles would Aric face in building these relationships - platonic or romantic.
Please drop us a few bullet points or paragraphs in a reply to this comment!

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