Hello! Thank you very much for your application. Overall, things are looking good, but we would like to seek clarification on a couple of points. Specifically:
Please give us his age. Though Marcus does not seem to physically grow old (like vampires), we ask that all of such immortal characters still have an age.
We need more information on his CRAU experiences, including: links to the game(s) he was played in, an explanation of any changes in his personality and skills that happened due to these experiences. This can be brief, but we do need it.
Would you be able to provide samples that are slightly more fleshed out? Perhaps link us to any publically available full threads, or starters/individual tags that have slightly more dialogue, personal sharing, or reactions specific to him (i.e., rather than generalized greetings).
Edited to add: We also need you to provide a name for your daemon which ends with -d. Please let us know if 'Blaird' would suit, or if you would prefer a different name ending with -d.
Thanks again for your app. Please drop us a few bullet points or paragraphs in a reply to this comment!
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Hello! Thank you very much for your application. Overall, things are looking good, but we would like to seek clarification on a couple of points. Specifically:
- Please give us his age. Though Marcus does not seem to physically grow old (like vampires), we ask that all of such immortal characters still have an age.
- We need more information on his CRAU experiences, including: links to the game(s) he was played in, an explanation of any changes in his personality and skills that happened due to these experiences. This can be brief, but we do need it.
- Would you be able to provide samples that are slightly more fleshed out? Perhaps link us to any publically available full threads, or starters/individual tags that have slightly more dialogue, personal sharing, or reactions specific to him (i.e., rather than generalized greetings).
- Edited to add: We also need you to provide a name for your daemon which ends with -d. Please let us know if 'Blaird' would suit, or if you would prefer a different name ending with -d.
Thanks again for your app. Please drop us a few bullet points or paragraphs in a reply to this comment!